The Coliseum

[MikeJV]

I wrote this about 4-5 years ago i think, i forgot why tho. I hope you like it.

MikeJV
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The Coliseum

2 men in fine silk togas and knee sandles are walking down a long white marble hall, discussing the upcoming battle in the Coloseum. "So Maximus, You think your 2 new fighters can beat Lady Rowina's Amazon? She's killed your last 4 fighters." "I killed the last one because Lady Rowina's Amazon ripped her breasts off." "She would of bled to death anyway Maximus." "A minor detail Emperor. My new fighters will defeat that Amazon bitch, Lady Rowina will be my sexual slave, and I'll finally taste those mountainous, milky-white breasts she's always flaunting in front of my wives." "I don't think your wives will be as gentle with her as you." Maximus laughs. "I agree, many of my wives would like to sink their claws into Lady Rowina's breasts... and I may let them once I'm finished with her." "Here we are Maximus, my Royal seats. Lady Rowina is waiting for us inside." The guard opens the door, and they enter. Moving past the few servants and guards, the Emporer in his throne, and Maximus to his right. Lady Rowina is on his left, being fed grapes by 1 of her serving girls. A cute, 5'1" blonde girl with perky orange-size breasts with gold rings in her pink nipples, and an immense, thick, wild blonde bush for a girl her age.

In a room under the Coliseum seats left of the Emperor, 2 dark skinned black women, twins actually, finish preparing for their 1st battle in the arena. The walls, floor and ceiling are all dirty stone blocks. It's a 30'x50' room, with 2 doors, 1 in the center of the 50' long walls, 1 to the hallway, the other lead to the arena. Stone benches ran the length of the room. The only light coming from the 100 torches running along the 50' walls, 1 torch every 12". "Are you ready Challa?" "Ready Malla." Although only 18 years old, both are experienced fighters, trained in many fighting styles, among them the martial arts of china. Maximus had traded 12 amazon slaves and 6 extraordinarily well endowed, blonde-haired blue-eyed serving girls. Many would say he was robbed, but he'd heard from several reliable people that these 2 fighters were worth it. They're 5'6", lean, hard muscled bodies with firm apple-sized breasts and hairless pussies. Their only clothes for this fight, a leopard skin loin cloth tied around their waists, covering their pussies.

On the right side of the arena was another room, identical to the room used by the twins. This is the room of the female Champion owned by Lady Rowina. "Please Hellacia, you haven't been milked in 2 days, let us drink of your breasts and relieve the discomfort you're in." Looking down from her her seat on the bench at the 2, 30 something year old brunette slaves, the 7' former Amazon queen closes her eyes for a second then sighs and brushes the blonde hair out of her face. "You know I'm fond of both of you, and would love for you both the suck my breasts dry, but Lady Rowina is promised first taste at the celebration tonight after I defeat Maximus' 2 new fighters. I've been here how long?" "Just over 16 years." And how many fights have I had?" "206" "Have I ever been defeated?" "No M'Lady." "Then don't worry. I'm not only Lady Rowina's favorite fighter, I've been the Champion for 16 years, killed hundreds of people and dozens of animals. I'm also Lady Rowina's best breeder and have 28 daughters and 6 sons from the nobles, and 26 daughters before they captured me. Now, do you think I'll lose?" Both slaves looked up at her and smiled. "No M'Lady." "Good. Now wait here, it's time for my fight."

Hellacia stands, shakes her thick, waist length blonde hair, cups her immense round breasts for a moment, knowing they're filled to bursting with milk, stretches her 7', heavily muscled frame, and starts down the hall leading out into the arena. As she approaches the exit it gets brighter, but her eyes adjust quickly to the change in brightness. As the enters the open arena, she raises her arms to the deafening cheers of the crowd. She crosses the arena confidently. When she reached the center, she turns to the Emperor, with the twins, salutes him and Lady Rowina, then turns toward her opponents.

At the Emperor's signal, Hellacia and the twins move apart. Being experienced warriors, none of them want the other to get an unfair start. Now that they were out in the light, and in the fight, Malla and Challa finally got a good look at their opponent. She'd been described to them, and they'd both seen and fought some big women, but as hardened as their lives had made them, they were awed by Hellacia. She had the size and muscle most men would envy, and huge, firm breasts would make Aphrodite herself jealous. They could also tell by how she moved, that despite her size and bulk, she was much faster and agile than would be expected. They looked at eachother and smiled, as the same thought crossed both minds. `Finally, a challenge worthy of our skills.'

Malla and Challa moved in just far enough apart that their huge opponent had to move her eyes side to side to watch them. Stopping just outside of kick range, Malla lunged in and sent a high round kick at the outside of Hellacia's right breast, that Hellacia blocked with her right arm. Just after that, as Malla was jumping back out of reach, Challa lunged in from the other side and sent a round kick at the outside of Hellacia's left thigh. Challa's kick bounced off the rock hard thigh muscles without any noticable reaction from Hellcia. Challa jumped back out of reach, barely avoiding a backfist uppercut by less than an inch. Regrouping with her sister, Challa has no doubt in her mind that had the blow connected, she'd be unconsious right now, possibly even dead. Hellacia's punches were frightening fast. After a quick discussion, both agreed that underestimating her could be a fatal mistake. Looking at a smiling Hellacia, they knew she knew it too, it was time for them to get serious.

The first few minutes of the fight were a blur to most of the crowd becuase Malla and Challa would alternate fighting Hellacia with strikes and kicks. Amazingly though, especially to the twins, was that most of them were blocked or just bounced off her heavily muscled body. Hellacia wasn't just blocking though, she was counter punching. Fortunately for them, most were blocked by their arms or just avoided. Most were head shots, due to the height difference between Hellacia and her small opponents. After 5 or so minutes passed, a thought slowly crept into their minds. They stopped briefly to assess their condition and Hellacia's. Hellacia looked fine, they were starting to feel the blows, given and blocked. They were beating themselves down, slowly, but that was it, they'd figured out part of her strategy!

A quick talk in their native tongue, and they attacked again, Malla first. Malla spent a full minute attacking her legs with kicks, then traded with Challa. Challa attacked her stomach and large, blonde haired pussy for a minute. Only a few of her strikes hit Hellacia's pussy, making her wince slightly each time, she ignored the body blows. When Challa jumped back out of range, Malla moved back in. Malla focused all her strikes and high kicks at Hellacia's massive breasts, not a single blow landed. When Malla jumped back out of range, she joined her sister in circling Hellacia. They carefully studied her body and discussed their attackes and how Hellacia reacted.

As they circled though, Hellacia moved too, and slowly herded the twin black sisters towards a wall of the arena. When they noticed they were only about 15-20' from the wall, they put their new attack plan into effect. They used a "hit and run" strategy now, attacking at every opportunity. They traded blocked shots and misses for 20 minutes solid, then it happend. Challa ducked a backfist and DRILLED the bottom of Hellacia's left breast with an uppercut. The spray of breast milk that burst from Hellacia's breast shocked them, they hadn't know she was milking. Even more shocking was the scream the blow ripped from her throat, stunning the entire crowd to silence. You see, what Malla and Challa had noticed earlier was that Hellacia was covered in scars, except for 2 or 3 small ones on her breasts. That told them everything they needed to know, and her scream confirmed it, Hellacia's breasts are her weakness, that's why she guarded them so fiercely.

The fighting stopped for maybe 10 seconds at most, 5 or 6 of those seconds were Hellacia's scream. When she attacked, Malla and Challa dove out of the way to opposite sides of Hellacia and regrouped about 20' away from a now enraged giantess. They had no doubts now about the outcome of this fight if they lost, Hellacia would butcher them like animals. She'd just gotten serious about winning. The fight picked up from here, with Malla and Challa stepping up their hit and run strategy now focused on her breasts, and Hellacia now focusing mainly on attacking them with punches and kicks. They traded blows for about 10 minutes. Hellacia's breasts taking a beating and starting to turn red. Malla and Challa took several kicks to their stomachs and breasts, painful, but they were tensed and absorbed the blows. Although they were both knocked down a few times from the stomach blows, they recovered quickly.

At about the 20 minute mark, Hellacia started grunting each time they landed a blow to her breasts, and her punches and kicks were slowing down. Another 8-10 minutes later, Hellacia was breathing heavier and her breasts were red and starting to bruise. This is the moment they started using their battle tested "Giantess killing" moves. Well, not actually killing moves, they'd been ordered not to kill Hellacia if they could avoid it. Challa moved in and caught an overhand right by the wrist, with both hands, twisted the arm to paralyse Hellacia for a second, and pulled it to the right while kicking the inside of Hellacia's right knee, making her spread her legs enough for the followup move. Now Malla moved in fast and low, and taking aim, drove a right uppercut at Hellacia's pussy. As expected, her fist slammed through Hellacia's huge, thick labia, and drove her arm deep into Hellacia's pussy, her fist actually breaking into, and hitting the top of, Hellacia's womb. (her arm buried past her elbow) The effect was immediate and devastating. Hellacia froze and screamed in agony.

Challa released her hold on Hellacia's arm as Malla yanked her arm out of Hellacia's pussy and stepped aside. Challa stepped in and drove 6 of her fastest, hardest front heel kicks up into Hellacia's partly protruding clit, brutalizing it. Needless to say, Hellacia dropped to her knees in agony. Hellacia knew she was beaten, but couldn't accept it..... not yet. Now Malla and Challa moved up and, for the next 10 minutes, beat Hellacia's breasts without mercy. Despite their size, Hellacia's breasts bouced all over her chest, spraying milk in all directions and soaking Malla and Challa. Then they both grabbed a huge rubbery nipple and for the next 10 minutes pulled, twisted and stretched it like they were trying to rip them from her breasts. They stretched from thier original 3" length, to 9" for a brief moment, Hellacia stopped screaming halfway through the nipple abuse, and just sat on her feet crying like a baby at the destruction of her prized possessions, her breasts. Tiring of this, they spent 4-5 minutes using their fingernails to scratch her dinnerplate-sized areola bright red and raw. Satisfied with this, and because Hellacia hadn't submitted yet, (and their arms were getting tired) they began kicking her breasts viciously. This caused more milk to spray out for another 5 or more minutes, before it happened.

Blood began spraying from Hellacia's stretched out, raw nipples. The milk didn't last much longer, then it was only blood leaking from Hellacia's breasts. "OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD, MY BREASTS..... You... you've ruined my breasts!!! No more... please! I.. I sub.... I SUBMIT TO YOU, I SURRENDER! Just PLEASE, NO MORE, I beg you both. Please spare my breasts." Hellacia then collapsed to the ground, face dowm, crushing her breasts beneath her... and began sobbing.

The End?

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ April 12, 2007 02:41 PM: Message edited by: MikeJV ]</font>

[cage]

Very nice...I was just kicking around going Roman for awhile myself, but I'd rather see you do a few more on the subject. Interesting characters and lots of potential for going outrages.

[Abbyfan]

Mike,

Great story!.... you've got to love an Amazon named "Hellacia"......As you can probably tell, I'm quite partial to "Amazon" and "Gladiatrix" themes....so I'd certainly appreciate more from the "Coliseum".

Abbyfan

[unkins]

BRILLIANT!!! Loved it!! [img]smile.gif[/img]

Cheers,
Veronika

[segano]

oh, yeah....

[agraf74]

Long live the Coliseum!

However, I sugest some numbers should be revised:

?I'm not only Lady Rowina's favorite fighter, I've been the Champion for 16 years, killed hundreds of people and dozens of animals. I'm also Lady Rowina's best breeder and have 28 daughters and 6 sons from the nobles, and 26 daughters before they captured me.?

Allowing the Champion to have had the first child at 14yo, and a few months between pregnancies, she was 48yo when she was captured and enslaved. that would not allow for such a strong, and able, and athletic arena fighter as this giantess...

I get she had proper training and her hard life prepared her to all the debauchery and gore of the Coliseum.

However - her time is coming to an end.

I suggest that Lady Rowina intervenes here, sparing her life before the two new girls finish her with their kicking and fisting.

Then a rematch is due - with proper weapons: a long spear or trident for the big mature fighter, short daggers for the nubile youngsters.

There, the champion is not only going to be "milked", but actually be forced to spend to the last ounce of blood.

The end, then?! No, please! There are a number of her daughters, possibly some twins, too, eager to take revenge on these two upstarters :-)

[MikeJV]

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, but i have a few comments, bt regardless of how they sound they are NOT negative, so please don't take them as such.

1: after reading your reply some things came back to me. I did "crunch the numbers of her kids, her age at the time, etc... and as you comment att he end, there are multiple twins and triplets along with a couple singles, if you check around you'll find that altho rare, a woman having muliple births in multiple pregnancies does happen. (i'm like a dictionary of odd medical facts, i love abnormality, especially extreme cases)

2: I do like your suggestions for sequels, but i already had/have some fights planned, and they do involve Malla & Challa, Helacia's daughters, as well as Lady Rowina herself. (these are apoilers i know, *frown* but I felt it needed to be mentioned.

3: a final note... I know you meant well, but sme people may take offense at someone correcting their story like you did. I wasn't offended, didn't care for it much, but I was NOT offended in any way. For future reference, please PM any similar comments to the author instead of posting it, it could be considered by some to be disrecpectfull and/or embarrassing to him/her. Some people don't handle it well because they're new to writing, or just sensitive. I've seen several writers quit writing because of a comment that was, or they percieved as, being negative and/or an attack on them.

MikeJV

[unkins]

OMG!! Malla & Challa, Helacia's daughters?? I can--not wait for that! [img]smile.gif[/img]

I HOPE they are ridiculously well endowed and rather thin...

So awesome! [img]smile.gif[/img]

Cheers,
Veronika

[MikeJV]

They are Veronika... all of'em. *smile*

the bad news, it may be a month or 2 before i can get a sequel done, i have to finish 2 other things first.

MikeJV

[Jessikafights]

Surprised I've not replied ... looking forward to sequel ... pity though 2 months to wait ... but am sure it'll be worth it! [img]wink.gif[/img]

Ciao
Jessie
P.S. I'm very busy at present & may only sporadically pop in here & randomly read & comment here & there!